Just knocked up a quick axe to try and summarise the different programmes. We could colour-code the buildings on the top part like Matt was describing.
looks good to me. We could perhaps do a separate axo to show the the different building types and have it coming of as a side shoot. do you think we should add the norias as i put them on the su model?
Also have you decreased the amount of green productive space compared to the last visual of the master plan? I think it works better with more soapbox space as shown here
one more point haha. Do you think you could change the massing of the market places so its one building like on the master plan.. I was thinking that just the rag market structure would remain and be adapted whilst the other fall into disrepair/demolition as the markets go underground.
No it should be the same. I think its probably confusing because on the last visual I showed some of the public space as grass (the darker green strips) but I can easily change that to another surface.
I need to show more of the irrigations structure generally so if the norias work in this Ill put them on too. Will change the market building too.
looks good to me. We could perhaps do a separate axo to show the the different building types and have it coming of as a side shoot. do you think we should add the norias as i put them on the su model?
ReplyDeleteAlso have you decreased the amount of green productive space compared to the last visual of the master plan? I think it works better with more soapbox space as shown here
ReplyDeleteone more point haha. Do you think you could change the massing of the market places so its one building like on the master plan.. I was thinking that just the rag market structure would remain and be adapted whilst the other fall into disrepair/demolition as the markets go underground.
ReplyDeleteNo it should be the same. I think its probably confusing because on the last visual I showed some of the public space as grass (the darker green strips) but I can easily change that to another surface.
ReplyDeleteI need to show more of the irrigations structure generally so if the norias work in this Ill put them on too. Will change the market building too.